2 weeks ago we made poems for the lives taken in the Christchurch shooting that happened on the fifteenth of march.I made this poem to show that together were one and together we stand strong.
Hello LJ It is Braxton from next door commenting on your blog. I absolutely love this poem because the rhymes and facts about your poem is amazing also it gives me an idea of my poem accept a better version maybe you could add more in the end but everything else is amazing I can’t wait to see more work from you in the future come and check me out at https://kpsbraxtonleer.blogspot.com/ have a great week and bye.
Kia Ora LJ my name is Harlem I really like your poem about Christchurch. It is really nice and thoughtful how you felt about that sad moment. We all stand together as a team and I hope that the police will put him in jail for a very long time. The people who died did not deserve to die; they were good people. Rest In Peace to the people who had their lives suddenly taken away from them and mainly for the families that are still here ☹️😢.AROHA ATU AROHA MAI!!!!!!!
Hello LJ It is Braxton from next door commenting on your blog.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love this poem because the rhymes and facts about your poem is amazing also it gives me an idea of my poem accept a better version maybe you could add more in the end but everything else is amazing I can’t wait to see more work from you in the future come and check me out at https://kpsbraxtonleer.blogspot.com/ have a great week and bye.
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DeleteKia Ora LJ my name is Harlem I really like your poem about Christchurch. It is really nice and thoughtful how you felt about that sad moment. We all stand together as a team and I hope that the police will put him in jail for a very long time. The people who died did not deserve to die; they were good people. Rest In Peace to the people who had their lives suddenly taken away from them and mainly for the families that are still here ☹️😢.AROHA ATU AROHA MAI!!!!!!!
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